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Halloween Countdown, Day 15

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"The Wood Water" by Madison J. Cawein (1905)

An evil, stealthy water, dark as hate,
Sunk from the light of day,
'Thwart which is hung a ruined water-gate,
Creeps on its stagnant way.

Moss and the spawny duckweed, dim as air,
And green as copperas,
Choke its dull current; and, like hideous hair,
Tangles of twisted grass.

Above it sinister trees,—as crouched and gaunt
As huddled Terror,—lean;
Guarding some secret in that nightmare haunt,
Some horror they have seen.

Something the sunset points at from afar,
Spearing the sullen wood
And hag-gray water with a single bar
Of flame as red as blood.

Something the stars, conspiring with the moon,
Shall look on, and remain
Frozen with fear; staring as in a swoon,
Striving to flee in vain.

Something the wisp that, wandering in the night,
Above the ghastly stream,
Haply shall find; and, filled with frantic fright,
Light with its ghostly gleam.

Something that lies there, under weed and ooze,
With wide and awful eyes
And matted hair, and limbs the waters bruise,
That strives, yet can not rise.

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gilda_elise
Oct. 15th, 2015 11:04 am (UTC)
Wow, that's creepy. Makes you want to stay away from any pond at night. There's one behind our back fence, in a forested area, that probably looks very like!
eldritchhobbit
Oct. 16th, 2015 11:41 am (UTC)
Yikes! Don't go beyond your back fence. Especially at night. And especially in October! *wink*

acciochocolate
Oct. 15th, 2015 11:44 am (UTC)
Very scary! We thought of Grendal and his mother. I'm also reminded of Tolkien's "The Mewlips". Great find!
eldritchhobbit
Oct. 16th, 2015 11:42 am (UTC)
Oooh, great connections! I see what you mean. "The Mewlips" has always creeped me out. ::shivers::

I'm glad you enjoyed this.
seren_ccd
Oct. 15th, 2015 04:06 pm (UTC)
This is extremely timely for something I'm looking to write. Thank you!
eldritchhobbit
Oct. 16th, 2015 11:45 am (UTC)
Oh, that's wonderful! I'm happy to hear it!
greenhoodloxley
Oct. 16th, 2015 10:13 pm (UTC)
I loved this. Thanks for posting!
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